Yachiru's Bankai~

~Bankai (Captains Only)~


Link to training topic:https://bleachdestinysdoor.rpg-board.net/t762-through-the-fire-and-the-flames-solo-bankai-training#4873
Bankai appearance/Spirit Manifestation: Once released, the phoenix reverts to pure reiatsu and merges with Yachiru's body. She then grows a large set of aqua blue wings composed of fire and reiatsu. Her eyes become milky white, appearing as if she was blind. Her blade changes shape, length, and color. The blade becomes a five foot long katana, sapphire blue in color, and becomes engulfed in flames. Her Shikai attire eventually incinerates from the heat of the flames, but is soon replaced by a red and gold Kimono.

~Bankai Techniques/Abilities~

Name of abilty/technique: Flame Burial
Description: Once Yachiru stabs the ground with her blade, She opens a large fissure that spews intense flames. The fissure is essentially a gateway to hell, so to speak. A series of bird like claws form in the flames, and if they can grasp on to her opponent, they will attempt to drag them into the depths of the crag. The claws are composed of flames and reiatsu and can cause mild burns (1st to 2nd degree) if the claws touch the target. The claws are also mildly slow moving, therefore easy to avoid if the opponent is fast enough. If the opponent can break Yachiru's concentration while the claws are holding them, the claws will revert back to simple flames and the fissure will close. To put it simply, Yachiru needs full concentration to perform the ability to its fullest, or else the ability fails and cannot be performed again until the cooldown has run its coursethe.
Duration: 3 posts, ends immediately if her concentration is broken.
Cool Down: 6 posts
Preparation: 1 post


[Only putting one tech for now since she will be just learninher Bankai ICy~]

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and if they can grasp on to her opponent, they will drag them into the depths of the crag where they will be trapped until Yachiru seals her Bankai

That is the only part that needs changing, if you read it it deosnt give the target much option and can be considered god modding. the rest is o.k.

Oh and yeah 1 ability is what anyone learning bankai would get ^^

Edited ^^

I think this is a great first Bankai Ability ^^ You have my 1/3

3/3 : D

Nice ability ^^

Alrighty ^^ So you can begin your training now ^^ If you are going to be training solo then you will need around: 4000 words.

I would think that solo would be better so you dont have to wait for someone else to post and be held up.

But if you want you can do it with someone but that is still 4000 words (yours, that doesnt include theirs)

It might be alot but getting bankai is not easy ^^

When youve done the training edit your first post and put in the topic link. After the training has been looked over the rest will be dealt with ^^

After having reviewed your training i am glad to say congratulations on your new rank ^^