Sara Jane Swan The Vizard

Vizard Application

~Basic~

Name: Sara Jane Swan
Alias/Nickname:Sa
Actual Age:175
Physical Age: 17
Gender: Female
Former Division: 4th
Former Rank: vice captain

~Appearance~

Height:178cm
Weight:43 kilos
Eye Color:ice blue
Hair Color/Style:black
Complexion:fair
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~Personality~

Personality: An outgoing girl who embarrasses herself a lot, but she does not get easily embarrassed. People think that she dyed her hair black and that she is naturally blonde, since she acts like it. She is forgetful, but is a great friend. She treats people close to her like they are her brothers and sisters. She has a habit of getting hurt and is clumsy like Sakura, but worse. Her latent was in healing, you could tell this by seeing how quick her scares healed. She is not a morning person and hates to leave her warm and cozy bed, most of the time she has to be dragged out, She loves to try diffrent tpyes of food and loves adventure. She has a shot attention span and gets distracted easly, but she commits herself in her work then it is hard for her to get distracted. Around people she can get load and carried away alot, but she also has a quite side and hates the awkawrd silece.

Sexuality: Straight.
Relationship Status: Single
Quirks: She likes to stuff her mouth with food when ever she can, she greatest weekness is food, even though she doesn't but on any extra weight on.
History:Sara grew up in America with her older brother, her mother died giving birth to her and her father went missing when she was five. At the age of eleven she cut her hair short to look like a boy, so she could get a job, since her brother became sick. Sara worked as a stable hand for a rich family. Sara fell in love with the eldest son who was only a year or two older then her. At first they became good friends, but then when she was seventeen. He found out that she was a beautiful girl and he also fell in love with her. The two would sneak out at night to see each other. One night they went to have a picnic on a cliff, they didn’t know that the cliff was unstable, they sat there and watched the stars, when suddenly the ground started to tremble and parts of the cliff started to fall, the part where they sat. They both dyed.

Sara found herself in the Soul Society. And the man she loved wasn’t there with her, she felt lost. She walked around the town she was near and had a small job. A few years later she decided to become a Shinigami and enrolled herself at the Academy. Since she wasn’t so smart she was always at the bottom of the class, but that all changed when she met Sakura. The red head helped mentor her and the two became best friends. She was able to graduate from Sakuras help. The two of then joined the 8th squad. Sara found herself training most of the time and was put in a different group from her friend. After a few years she was transferred to the 4th squad and became a 10th seated officer, she slowly worked her way up to lieutenant.

Sara was so happy to become a lieutenant; she healed so many other shinigami, which made her so happy that her skills were put into good use. But sadly the happiness she found soon vanished as she found out about the hollow inside her. Sara felt the need to escape. She persuaded her captain to let her go on a dangerous mission, in case they need to be healed. her captian agreed to let her go, but she never left with the team, instead she ran off to the world of the living. She decided to explore the word of the living. during that time she found out that the team she was in was caught in the Phenomenon, which she thought was a good way to cover her absence.


In the world of the living she decided to travel around the world, later on she found out about the Phenomenon which the team she was in got caught up in. She felt like that was a great way to cover her absence. While traveling the world she went to many diffrent countries and learnt about there culter, she could feel the hollow in her getting stronger and she knew that she had to fin the other vizared and learn how to control the other part of her, the hollow within her.
Mask Information

Name: Alice
Manifestation: A twenty year older version of herself, with pale skin, same eyes and hair, but tattoos going across her left arm.
Ability / Enhancement: It increases her power by 25%
Hollow Mask Appearance: [img][/img] (without the red/orange part sort of stuffed up)
Duration::[/color] 8 posts (per battle)

~Zanpakuto Information~

Blade Name: Ora
Sealed Blade appearance: A metal blade with a black handle.
Zanpaktou spirit: A lump of sand that can take any form.
Inner world A desert.

~Shikai Information~

Release Phrase:Sands of the deserts, Ora!
Released blade appearance:The blade turns in to small grains of sand


~Shikai Techniques/Abilities~ (A captain-level Vizard can have 2 unique abilities to begin with. Lieutenant-level can have 1. More can be learnt later via the technique board or can be rewarded after tournaments)

Name of abilty/technique:Grains of life
Description: Once a grain of sand touches it's victoms wound, it slowly eats up any flesh that is near it, but will only do this at command. Its weekness is wind, but it can only work if it lands in the wound/s if not then the attack is pointless. The sand travels at a slow pace, normally the wound is grown by 5% then the grains of sand would die.
Duration:one posts.
Cool Down:5 posts
Preparation:untill Sara whispers "eat."

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~Other Techniques~
Swordsmanship: Average
Shunpo: Intermediate
Hand to hand: Intermediate
Kido: Advance
Others
Intelligence: Below average.

~Other Information~
~Rp Sample~
Sara walked out of the Karakuta town. She smiled as she entered the sunlight with her suitcase in one hand and large smoothie in the other. It had been four years since she left the Soul Society, she missed her Sakura and the others, but she knew that they were okay, well she hoped they were. So far she had traveled to Australia, America, Egypt, India, Morocco and Russia, now she had to decided to find the vizards warehouse, mainly to see how many old shinigami are vizards and to also find a place to stay. So far her plans were to start school and get a job, maybe a part time nurse or something.

“Taxi!” She yelled as the taxi drove past. She smiled as she hopped in, “Thanks, A nice hotel or something will do, but to too expensive.”

The driver nodded and took her there. Sara looked out the window and smiled at the sights. Wow this town looks wonderful . Once the taxi stopped outside the hotel she payed him and entered the large building. She went to the counter and booked a room for two nights. That should be plenty of time to find the warehouse She smiled as she entered the lift and went to the fourth floor where room was. She unlocked the door to her room and looked at the large bed in the middle of the room and the bathroom to her left. She shut the door behind her jumped on the bed. She sighed as she looked up at the light.

Done

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Name of abilty/technique:Sinking sand
Description:The sand will wrap around it’s victim and drain out 10% of the zunpakutos power as well as suffocating the victim.
Duration:one- two posts.
Cool Down:5 posts
Preparation:none

So basically you have a one shot one kill attack here. For staters, you can't drain a Zanpaktou power. Reiatsu, yes, Zakpaktou no. Please pick one or two posts for your duration. If it going to be one, no preperation. If two, please add at least a one post preperation for the attack.

How does she control the sand? What weakness is there in this attack?

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Shunpo: Basic)

Your applying for a Vice Captain position. your Shunpo can't be basic. Make at least intermediate.

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Kido: Basic)

Perhaps you don't realize this, but the 4th Division is a division that heals using Kido. means that you should be almost expert, not basic. Please change.

edited, i hope you don't mind that i changed that zunpakuto part to a diffrent type of attack.

hi,

I am taking over from Mina ^^ So basically i have a few things that need a little tweaking,

1. Please add something to the quirks area, right now you have nothing written there.
2. If possible please try to add some more to the history being a vizard she has gone through both shinigami life and vizard so there needs to be a little more.
3.

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Name of abilty/technique:Grains of life
Description: Once a grain of sand touches it's victoms wound, it slowly eats up any flesh that is near it, but will only do this at command. Its weekness is what, fire and wind, but it can only work if it lands in the wound/s if not then the attack is pointless.
Duration:one posts.
Cool Down:5 posts
Preparation:untill Sara whispers "eat."

O.k there needs to be a limit set on the amount of flesh it eats otherwise theoretically you could do an awful lot more damage then we would allow with this ability. Also you state fire and wind are its weaknesses, i understand the wind but how is it that fire effects it?

Sincerely,
lightning/orihime

edited,
i added that the wound woulg grow by 5% (or something close to that number) because i can't think of a good time limit.

I added more on the history... it is a tad, but I'm guessing it is still too short.

and I added a quirk

That is fine, here you go you can see my beloved:



sincerely,
Lightning/Orihime