Renzenku Hitimori

Vizard Application:

Name: Renzenku Hitimori
Alias/Nicknames: Ren
Age 434
Visual Age: 19
Appearance: Renzenku stands 6 foot 3 inches and is muscular in the sense that he has a high metabolism and therefore cannot fully be muscular, but he appears to be trim and relatively "buff". He has white spiked hair and calm light blue eyes. Tanned and smooth skin. His entire person is void of scars. He has a strong aura about him the tells of power, and yet exudes no true spiritual power at most times. Just looking at him one can see a leadership quality and general appeal of a cult of personality.


Personality: Renzenku is an odd person, he has a slow to rise temper and when it finally fully loads he explodes violently emotional. He tends to be very calm and analytical when serious, but acts as much like a teenager as he possibly can when he can. Ren is a genius, and he knows this, so he occasionally enters a "genius complex" type mode where he believes himself better than others, but usually he stays quite sane. He hates seeing innocent people harmed, but he can control himself from doing anything; mentally he tends to suffer some turmoil when he doesn't react. He also believes himself to be the "goodest" of good guys, as he tended to do more for comrades than others he had seen in combat but never the less he knows his place and respects authority, in his own way.
Sexuality: Straight
Relationship Status: Single
Birthday: Febuary 14
Family/Relatives: All Family Dead.
Ex Division/Rank: Ex 8th Division/Captain

Likes: Renzenku enjoys fighting, eating, writing, and cooking. Though they conflict with each other he can occasionally be caught fighting with one hand and eating something with the other; once he was even viewed cooking a lovely quiche while fighting off an opponent with his left foot. He also enjoys hanging out with the view people he considers friends, and actually prefers sparring to killing or lethal fights; though they don't trouble him to much.
Dislikes: There is not much Ren dislikes, though he does not tend to lean towards mindless and senseless killing for no reason; nor the killing of innocents. However he has been known to not bother with this personal dislike and move on through fighting.
Hobbies: Cooking, Writing, Sparring, and Reading
Quirks: He has no quirks, persay, but he does have an odd quirk of never trying all out.
Other Information: By some miracle of birth Renzenku cannot scar; no matter the wound it never heals into a scar. Renzenku is also a super genius with an eidetic memory.

History:

Mask Information

Name: Hyperion
Manifestation: Hyperion looks incredibly like an old monk. He definitely shows the same calm, serene personality. He appears wearing a flowing white robe streaked with what appears to be rays of sunlight and has long golden brown hair streaked with silver.
Unique Ability: Angelic Light. The control of any and all light in intensity only (brighter/dimmer no more)
Hollow Mask Appearance: A triple ray pattern down the right side of his face starting from around his ear and heading past his mouth. The is mirrored on the other side. These rays have a centimeter space between each other and meet each other over his mouth. These same rays are also straight down the center of his face over his nose and down.
Duration: 10 Post Duration, 6 Post Cooldown


Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Juryoku
Zanpakuto Looks:

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Zanpakuto Description: Complete and total control of Dust.
Released Zanpakuto Description: Dust Augmentation: Increases Regneration rates unfathomably by using the dust in the air to stop the blood, than augmenting it with spiritual energy and causing a healing wave to hit the wound, healing it. As well as a particularly high stat boost in Shikai.
Zanpakuto Release Phrase: "My world is unfathomable!"
Released Zanpakuto Looks:

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Techniques: (A captain-level Vizard can have 2 unique abilities to begin with. Lieutenant-level can have 1. More can be learnt later via the technique board or can be rewarded after tournaments)

Name of Technique: Eishohaki (Advanced)
Description of technique: A technique that releases Kidō without a spirit chant. This version of Eishohaki decreases the time needed for Kido without decreasing the power. While anyone well versed in Kidō can use this technique, it is most effective when done by a skilled practitioner, otherwise the spell could utterly fail. The most skilled experts are capable of using this technique to amazing effect.
Preparation time: N/A
Duration: 1 Use
Cooldown: 3 Posts

Name of Technique: Kamiboei
Description of technique: This creates a body suit made of polyester fused with portions of titanium alloy; keeping it extremely lightweight but very durable. Should the suit rip or tear it will repair itself. The face mask is made of fiberglass and can be up or down; either way it blends with the suit perfectly. There is a plain sheath that can be detached from the lower back of the suit.. The faceplate can be shaded or perfectly clear; depending on Ren's wants

Appearence:

When the facemask of this suit is down over Renzenku's face it takes him twice as long to perform Kidou, his strength is halved, his speed is halved, and the plate absorbs all of his spiritual pressure. While it is down the faceplate can not be destroyed due to the spiritual pressure.

When the mask is raised Renzenku gets all of his stats back and can use Kidou normally. In fact, the random spike in stats actually sends him over his regular stats (sending his speed and strength to 115% and Kidou occurs twice as fast) This only lasts for two posts however before it reallocates and goes down (strength and speed at 90% and Kidou occurs normally) for two posts before finally going back to normal.
Preparation time: N/A
Duration: As long as Ren wants.
Cooldown: N/A

RP SAMPLE: A hand clasped over his stomach and a grimace on his face the Raikage jumped again. His travel speed was intense, though not as fast as he would like, his feet touched down and he bent them quickly. Even with the bent knees the shock rippled up his body and sent another flow of blood over his red-stained hand. The males usually white clothing was died red in the front, the stains disappearing into a line of deep black that was his pants. In front of him was Andeddo Tokko, and the idiot was moving to fast to hear him, with luck Ren knew he could catch up. In his wounded state however it just wasn't happening.

Renzenku sensed his target ahead and breathed a sigh of relief. His hand pressed deep into the wound on his stomach, a white glow around his hand, and a crease on his brow from effort. The final jump took him next to a large tree, where he saw a battle ready Mizukage and his ANBU pal, along with his ANBU pal's pal, Koinu.

The Raikage landed violently, grass spread in a flurry as he landed and blood seeped from his wounds. Flowing like a blood red stream of water over his left hand, moving at a slow pace the male turned and knelt up, coughing blood violently. "Dammit...Andeddo..." A voice cut into Ren's thoughts, Hyperion, a flash of white light filled Ren's mind and he pictured an older male calmly meditating. 'You must rest, Raikage, you know even you can't do much under such a wound.' Ren scowled, apparently out of the blue and jerked his head to the right, I've been healing it this entire time, I can handle it. The pain isn't an issue! Hyperion laughed, a booming calm laugh that filled Rens mind with a calm ebbing flow. 'The pain you may be able to resist, but even at your current healing speed you will pass out before you fully heal it due to blood loss. You must relax and lay down; focus on your wound and not on blaming your friend for not hearing you.'

The Raikage's features lightened slightly as he accepted the words as logical fact, crawling a few inches Ren turned and collapsed to the ground once more. Lifting his left hand to his face he examined it in the filtered golden rays of the sun and wiped the blood from his mouth. His right hand still occupied with flowing a white chakra from it into the wound. Ren smiled warmly as he saw the bright blue sky, filled with clouds, above him. Birds soared far above his head and he listened to the careful twittering of the animals in the woods. Always in the back of his mind was the presence of Dominic and Andeddo; he really wasn't expecting Dominic to appear out of no where, but things can't be helped. Not as if it was actually any inconvenience.

Renzenku parted his lips only slightly, air sucked in between the parted mouth in great heaves a moment before he calmed and spoke lightly, in almost a whisper. "Healing Water..." The r faded away slowly into the morning light, which slowly grew in prominence like a warm blanket being spread across the area until a large area of where the Raikage lay was a bright as dawn. Though the light was a low warm light, for Ren didn't wish to have to readjust to the lighting. Assistance...

Hyperion sighed, it sounded much like a passing wind through an open field, and continued his calm meditation. 'You will be just fine; even without the help you'd end up healed at the current rate of metabolic blood loss.' Mentally the Raikage sighed and drew a deep breath. 'The problem lies in how tired I am already, not just the wound.' At that remark Hyperion just smiled, his eyes closed, and moved his background to be his usual Yin and Yang symbol. Ren cut the image off right away at that point, to mentally bright.

as i spoke to you in the cbox, the gravity and light control i wont allow as they are now. Let me knwo when you make the changes.

Fixed.

Light Control is still "light control" but I specified what I meant and weakened it; now it's just controlling light intensity (brightness)

Etc

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Zanpakuto Description: Gravity Control on a horizontal plane. Dependant on which direction his body is facing and how high he is. (IE: If he jumps up and is upside down in midair diagonally the plane of gravity he can control is diagonal too)
Released Zanpakuto Description: Gravity Regeneration- Super Inhanced Regeneration.

You misunderstand what we ask for here, we want a description of your blades appearance first in sealed and second released.

Also i have spoken to another admin and discussions are under way about some things on this app so please bear with us as we discuss them. I will ensure the conversation goes quickly. For now please feel free to edit the blade appearance areas quoted above.

sincerely,
Lightning

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Zanpakuto Name: (The name of your Zanpakuto.)
Zanpakuto Looks: (What your Zanpakuto normally looks like.)
Zanpakuto Description: (A basic description of your Zanpakuto's abilities.)
Released Zanpakuto Description: (A description of your Zanpakuto's abilities are once its been released.)
Zanpakuto Release Phrase: (what you say when you release your Zanpakuto.)
Released Zanpakuto Looks: (What your Zanpakuto looks like once released.)

Taken straight from the Vizard template ^.^

0-0 o.k weird i figured it would be the same as the shinigami template xD my bad lol o.k you don't have to edit that xD btw mina and i are discussing the app now ^^

Alright, I await the result .-.

Unless Lightning sees any further problem with this, I will put my seal on it.

Thank You

unapproved--this app is still under review by the admins.

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Mask Information

Name: Hyperion
Manifestation: Hyperion looks incredibly like an old monk. He definitely shows the same calm, serene personality. He appears wearing a flowing white robe streaked with what appears to be rays of sunlight and has long golden brown hair streaked with silver.
Unique Ability: Angelic Light. The control of any and all light in intensity only (brighter/dimmer no more)
Hollow Mask Appearance: A triple ray pattern down the right side of his face starting from around his ear and heading past his mouth. The is mirrored on the other side. These rays have a centimeter space between each other and meet each other over his mouth. These same rays are also straight down the center of his face over his nose and down.
Duration: 10 Post Duration, 6 Post Cooldown

What is the limit of this ability? Can he only control the light that isn’t made by another person? If so, could he possibly dim the sun and stars. For they do produce light.

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Zanpakuto Information

Zanpakuto Name: Juryoku
Zanpakuto Looks:
Spoiler:


Zanpakuto Description: Gravity Control on a horizontal plane. Dependant on which direction his body is facing and how high he is. (IE: If he jumps up and is upside down in midair diagonally the plane of gravity he can control is diagonal too)
Released Zanpakuto Description: Gravity Regeneration- Super Inhanced Regeneration. Gravity Augmentation- Instead of carrying his gravity manipulation on a horizontal plain he gains the ability to fully control his own personal gravity; but no more.
Zanpakuto Release Phrase: "My world is unfathomable!"

The ability is confusing to me. So depending on the way he facing, he could control the gravity in that direction? If so to what extent? Could someone stronger then him resist the gravity effect? Is there a way to cancel it out? Does it exhaust him? Please remove the Super enchanted regeneration and doesn’t go along with your zanpakuto gravity thing....Gravity Regenerations? Explain it better. ^^ There should also be a cool down when he manipulates gravity.

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Name of Technique: Kamiboei
Description of technique: This creates a body suit made of polyester fused with portions of titanium alloy; keeping it extremely lightweight but very durable. Should the suit rip or tear it will repair itself. The face mask is made of fiberglass and can be up or down; either way it blends with the suit perfectly. There is a plain sheath that can be detached from the lower back of the suit.. The faceplate can be shaded or perfectly clear; depending on Ren's wants
Appearence:

This, but white and grey with six golden dots instead of six red dots.


When the facemask of this suit is down over Renzenku's face it takes him twice as long to perform Kidou, his strength is halved, his speed is halved, and the plate absorbs all of his spiritual pressure. While it is down the faceplate can not be destroyed due to the spiritual pressure.

When the mask is raised Renzenku gets all of his stats back and can use Kidou normally. In fact, the random spike in stats actually sends him over his regular stats (sending his speed and strength to 115% and Kidou occurs twice as fast) This only lasts for two posts however before it reallocates and goes down (strength and speed at 90% and Kidou occurs normally) for two posts before finally going back to normal.
Preparation time: N/A
Duration: As long as Ren wants.
Cooldown: N/A

How long does it takes the suit to repair itself? There should be a cool down for the repairing. And anything can be destroyed...though it could have a high durability. :\ Decrease the percentage that he receives from removing the suit. And why does he get this boost? Just for the simple fact he get his spiritual pressure back? Explain please...

Only light not made by other people can be controlled. And technically yes he could dim the sun and stars; though attempting to do so would drain him dry of Spiritual Energy and kill him.

Gravity: He can control gravity on a horizontal plane, meaning in all directions; but only that range within his height. (As in; 6 feet and three inches space up and down, and any length) It depends on which way his Zanpakuto Blade is facing (If it's facing straight up, he can control gravity straight up and down. etc)

You can fight against it, there's nothing to say you can't, it would be just like fighting gravity. (IE: Not much you can do in zero gravity, but use Spiritual Pressure to stabilize yourself. But gravity on your shoulders and can just be strong enough to bear) No way to cancel it out, unless you count knocking Renzenku unconscious or knocking his blade from him.

It takes spiritual pressure to effectively do at extremely high levels, so yes it would exhaust him over time.

Gravity Regenerations works by simply increasing gravity around himself by high amounts and then fielding it away from himself at the same time. Studies show that in low gravity your muscles weaken and thin because they don't have to work; the same is true of the reverse, high gravity overworks your cells. Through the use of gravity Renzenku makes his cells function at an extremely high rate and balances them out after with low gravity to prevent to much strain on his body. However, doing this would cause a full muscle body pain.

Well, having a direct cooldown of manipulation gravity would render the ability useless, as the gravity returns to normal once Ren stops manipulating it. So, how about for every post he uses it in, the equal amount of cooldown posts must follow.

The suit itself repairs at a constant rate, as in automatically, and the cooldown (why does this need a cooldown? O.o) would be something like one post...

I'll change the boost to 110% And it's due to his body normalizing the spiritual pressure once more. His actual spiritual energy is still his to control; it just suddenly gives the pressure all back meaning it becomes fully visible. While his body readjusts to it it goes up and down then normal.

i (and tia when i spoke to her) simply so do not like the idea of gravity being controlled in such a manner. I am afraid i am inclined to dislike it no matter what explainations you give it and i am sure Tia is also. Gravity is something that easily turns a character op'd.

Yay for more work down the drain...Alright, time to think of some paperweight ability...Done

Bump? .-.

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Zanpakuto Description: Complete and total control of Dust.
Released Zanpakuto Description: Dust Augmentation: Increases Regneration rates unfathomably by using the dust in the air to stop the blood, than augmenting it with spiritual energy and causing a healing wave to hit the wound, healing it. As well as a particularly high stat boost in Shikai.
Zanpakuto Release Phrase: "My world is unfathomable!"

Increases Regneration rate unfathomably? Explain further...how long will it take heal a cut? Broken Limb? Severe Limb? If this the cause there is a regeneration guide that should be followed. And how high of a boost to shikai?

And yeah “J Sosuke” had claimed that avy for his character. ^^
https://bleachdestinysdoor.rpg-board.net/face-claim-f69/j-face-claim-t380.htm

Cut: Instantaneous (Well, same post it's dealt in at the beginning)
Gash: Same post, but not until the end of the post
Broken Limb: In two posts the limb is mended, but for another two posts after that it's "weak", as in it can't take much pressure before it breaks. In total a four post heal.
Severed Limb: Eight posts. Though for the duration of the painful healing process a limb of dust replaces it, the limb is no where near as physically powerful but it can't be harmed. Can only perform very basic movements.

The shikai boost is 2x the normal boost. (Whatever the normal boost may be .-.)


And about the face; I knoes T.T It sucks for me considering the effort into the edits of the dude but I'll attempt to find a new pic. Actually, this may sound weird; but google Renzenku and tell me which pic you like the best x.x (( http://www.google.ca/images?hl=en&source=imghp&biw=1020&bih=596&q=renzenku&gbv=2&aq=f&aqi=g10&aql=&oq=&gs_rfai= ))

There is no normal boost for shikai...o-o it all depends on the level of each individual, along with other factors(communication with spirit,etc.)

Will approve after new pic is found

Well, I guess I'll choose this pic x.x (Avatar not Sig)

proved unless the other admins/mods. sees different